first draft - conclusion

Languages are very important in our lives. Everytime and everywhere we can see and hear the languages. We can say we are live in the languages. And because we are living in the lanugages, people can develope their languages. When we acquire language for the first time is when we were babies and we have to think about how we became be good at languages. Some says that people are born to be the genius of languages, have innate acquiring ability for language. However, if all the people have innate ability fot lanuguage, all people's level of the language will be same. If all the people are born with the innate ability for language, how people developed the language for a long time. How they could make better languages as time goes by even there no exists better or poor language acquring in the world? So, we need to pay attention to the behaviorism in language acquiring. In the world, there is no work that can be done without practicing. Lnaguage is the same. We learn and practice through trial and error, and therefore we can gain more developed languages as time goes by like Korean. Therefore, language was developed and is developing and will more developed in the future.